God's Will

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    • lemuwah
    • is trudging, try, wandering thru, trying to find what I'm to do.

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    I am having my second miscarriage and having a hard time dealing with it. This will hopefully help me to accept one of the many things I cannot change, and gain some wisdom from it. God Willing

    God's Will
    We picked your name
    My son and I-it was a game
    Would it be Grace Dawn
    Or maybe Matthew Sean

    I thought before this one starts
    Why risk having broken hearts
    After trying before and losing them-
    I had a choice,should I keep him?

    If I knew that I would lose you
    Would I still make the choice to
    carry you faithfully and love you
    the way I felt compelled to

    So my beautiful little angels fly
    I'll always stop and wonder why
    God chose to take you before your time
    So much it feels a horrendous crime.

    But I will keep trust in God's will
    even tho it seems so far uphill
    I have to accept the way things are
    And hope to see you-no matter how far.

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    Charlie23 commented on God's Will

    10-04-2009

    I'm so sorry for your loss. God's holding onto him now.
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    Hampton commented on God's Will

    09-16-2009

    Simply put in heartfelt rhyme with the loss still present but passed to God's hands.
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    SILKYTWEED commented on God's Will

    09-09-2009

    OMG...Beautiful Expressive Write....on remorse...I feel you on hear and my heart cries at this unfortunate experience, I hope this beautiful declaring write, helps to lighten your load some...Thanks for sharing!!
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    cmlestrade commented on God's Will

    09-05-2009

    I am so sorry for your loss. you;ve written a beautiful poem that tells it all. God Bless.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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