God's Work

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God's Work

When God positioned the world in place,
when he faultlessly set the planets up in space,
when He made the nations, placed the sea,
Created mankind of you and me
when he saw that everything was great
He put a wholehearted woman in place
A mother who for her child could go the extra mile
just to see her little one’s smile
She'll grind her fingers to the bone
Just to make a house a home
A mother who's just assistance
could elliminate the resistance
She'll lend a helping hand
Until you get your force to stand
A woman with a child doesn't make you a mother
But this woman Evie Nevels is like no other
She appears to  listens o so well
Never your secrets she would tell
She’ll influence you to stay strong
When everything seems to go wrong
That extra push is what she gives
Her name’s a legend, it’ll always live
I thank God for you in every single way
To you and to the mother board
I say to you
Happy Mother Appreciation Day


 

 

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Photojan12 commented on God's Work

09-22-2009

What great perception for someone so young. I started writing poetry when I was about 12 and it does help to deal with the unanswere questions of life. Bravo... Keep going..You're a great writer.

Jasmarie

09/23/2009

thank you so much for commenting on my poetry i think i was about 12 when i started writing and im still young and have alot of time to get better

tsgirl commented on God's Work

06-13-2009

I am sorry , I don't mean to offend you,BUT come on get real you are not 16 with a mind like this you are awesome, thank you so much you described my Mother to the T Lord bless her soul, it's been 10 months now and it seems as thou she's still here. God Bless you ! this is a master piece, that needs to be framed. 1LUV

Jasmarie

06/13/2009

your the first person that have said something like this to me...i really am 16 and i really do appreciate your comment....ive been writing since i was about 12 but no one really listens to them so i truly thank you and im glad that it could be a good impact on someone...i tell u wat if you give me a topic to write about i would write about it and i would like for you to comment on it...1luv

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Jasmarie’s Poems (18)

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True Friends 0
Self-Seeking 1
Dont Settle For Nothing Less 0
A Message To Evil 1
What Happens Now? 1
Are You Really My Friend? 2
Just Another Day, Just Another Way 0
To Be Strong 0
What is love 0
The Boy Who Cried Wolf 1
Secret Love 0
Job Well Done 0
But Look At Me Now 2
God's Work 2
Invisible 0
lesson learned 1
Evil, He's Approaching 1