Are You Really My Friend?

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    Are You Really My Friend?

    Alot of things I seem to lack,
     a few flaws i seem to bare
    But it's not your place to judge me,
    its unethical, oh its not even fair
    you don't know what I have to go through,
    every single day
    you only see my put on and you dont even care to say
    things like "excuse me but how was your day, or
    "what things that you had to go through to get you where u are today"
    it's cuz you dont want to help me better me
    you want to see me fall
    you just want to see my present
    when you dont even know the cause
    Are You Really My Friend? could i cry on your shoulder
    or when you see my tear would you just push me over
    if im in the streets and want move, would you just run me over
    or would you wipe the tear away
    and tell me that your here to stay
    "IM A FRIEND ILL NEVER STRAY"
    "IM NOT A ONE DAY FRIEND, I'LL BE HERE EVERY DAY"
    "IF YOU NEED ME ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY'
    "AND BY MY HEART YOUR HEAD CAN LAY"
    "I CAN'T PROMISE IT'LL BE OK"
    "BUT I PROMISE THAT I WOULD HELP YOU PAY"
    "FOR ALL THE MISTAKES YOU EVER MADE"
    "WE'LL DO IT "AS ONE" TOGETHER, IF IT TOOK FOREVER"
    "BECAUSE IM YOUR FRIEND, SO MY TIME I WILL LEND"
    "CUZ THAT'S WHAT FRIENDS DO"
    I JUST WANT TO HELP YOU THROUGH"
    "IT'S ALL BECAUSE OF ONE THING"
    "BECAUSE I SEE THE BEST IN YOU"


         DEDICATED TO MY FRIEND INDEED "CEL"

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    Sx9 commented on Are You Really My Friend?

    03-08-2011

    so u ask are you my friend,yes and no,for what you feel is different from what inspiration vibes,friends are true and honest that too is your vibes,so if you see the best in me what do I see in myself,,straight vibes,,

    hdmac commented on Are You Really My Friend?

    09-13-2009

    Good words. I like this tough love. It's great encouragement.

    Jasmarie

    09/14/2009

    thanks for the comment..if u havent all ready i would love for you to read the rest of them....thanks again

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    Jasmarie’s Poems (18)

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    What Happens Now? 1
    Are You Really My Friend? 2
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    To Be Strong 0
    What is love 0
    The Boy Who Cried Wolf 1
    Secret Love 0
    Job Well Done 0
    But Look At Me Now 2
    God's Work 2
    Invisible 0
    lesson learned 1
    Evil, He's Approaching 1