Gone.

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    I wrote this after I was in a car crash with a friend and he saved my life but he didn't make it. thanks for reading.

    Gone.

    I see the fire in your eyes.
    A dying flame,
    I see the stormy skies.
    Yet so tame.
    I watch the blood flow,
    Like a river of love.
    More than I can know,
    But not yours up above
    You sit on the clouds,
    And the moon cries for God,
    This time I cry out loud
    There was nothing I could do
    I had to let your hand fall
    I watched the life slip away
    I heeded your final call
    So I live to force the sad day along
    But it's so hard without you
    See that line ever so green
    I was never as brave as you
    Even when you were hooked to the screen
    But I will fight this evil inside me
    And share it only with you
    You are the only one I want to see
    But there is nothing I can do
    Now they tell me your in a better place
    But I wounder where did you go
    How come I can't look apon your face
    And let everyone know
    But I know your sleeping in the sky
    Watching over me
    So I sit and cry
    Because I don't like what you see.

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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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