The World

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    The World

     We are all posing in a COMMERCIAL world
    Everyone is HIDING behind a SUPERFICIAL visage
    Each person is plced in a GENRE
    Everyone plays this GAME
    Even those who SPEAK OUT against it??
    Behind which FACADE will you hide?
    Your SELF is not TRUE
    it is an IMAGE you POSE for others;
    For you were NOT BORN the way you are NO
    by you ACTIONS you have CHOSEN, CHANGED,
    and WALKED a path
    So choose your pose and try not to screw up the PICTURE

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    DeepEclipse commented on The World

    01-28-2010

    Indeed. Society carves the one-way path and pride follows suit. The pre-determined lifestyle is implanted and the script is followed out. Hands slapped by the director if you don't speak your lines correctly. Excellent write bunny. I only wish it were longer. Refreshing read.
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    Mrpoetry commented on The World

    01-20-2010

    cool poem. keep writing and use your hands to glorify Jesus
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