Good-bye

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  • Sadness

    Good-bye
    no way
    don't want it
    no more
    just can't
    go on
    don't need it
    give up
    no choice
    too far
    too deep
    good-bye
    who cares
    i don't
    it's over
    i'm weak
    just push
    i'll fall
    will break
    no hope
    too late
    good-bye

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    JLorian commented on Good-bye

    03-02-2009

    Nice visual... I loved the part, "Just push, I'll fall". Keep writing. You have a distinctive style.
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