Grateful Treasure

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    Grateful Treasure

    Trouble, trouble all around,
    When one circle is broken, another comes down.
    Sorrow piles on sorrows, creating a heap,
    Unsteady ground, for my unsteady feet.

    The sun rises a new day arrives,
    Still my hopes crashes, no good survives.
    My best friend is darkness, evil is my ally,
    Good is far from me, great distance am I.

    Future looks bleak, I'm slave to despair,
    Cannot give up, must be something still there.
    I've lost loved ones, so tender, so dear,
    Pools of water created from anguished tears.

    Unmovable mountains, goals not yet reached,
    Blanket is failure, my bed is defeat.
    Heart made of glass, fragile and breakable,
    Scared to love, confidence too shakeable

    Falling many times, but ever getting up,
    Not staying down, not buried in muck,
    As long as a day comes,  and show its head,
    I will go on, because not yet dead.

    Sure I am low, down in elevation
    But falling and getting up, my cause for celebration.
    Life is not over, victory still possible,
    Just keep getting up, mentally unstoppable.

    Then in the end will find my result,
    Peace from within, from not giving up.
    Will always have issues, full of trouble and strife,
    But a grateful treasure, this thing called life.

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    Luwonda commented on Grateful Treasure

    02-03-2011

    I like it! You are thankful for simple things in life; like peace, the sunshine, not giving up and little things in life that help you. And I like the nature metaphors of the waves and the mountains. And the similes of heart and tears. Good write!

    wjpharg

    02/11/2011

    Thank you I like writing poems that signify overcoming the odds and even if you are down you still have desire to keep on fighting !!!!

    bigsisjeri8 commented on Grateful Treasure

    10-26-2009

    very nice we need to cheer you up some though. look forward too seeing more of your work.

    wjpharg

    10/26/2009

    Yes pretty somber poem , I like writing poems like that because there is always light at the end of the tunnel , I hope people do not think I am that way it is just I want people to know despite how bad things are you can make it through. You will be surprise to know I am a cheery person people always wonder how come I do not let things get me down and this poems express that for me just to go on.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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