Greed

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getting lost....

Greed

So much competition, we sit and ponder,
We reach for the ring, but our wants tend to wander,
Then how to make real, this treasure of mind,
Hopes dashed, plans smashed,
So close but with so little time,

The world at your fingers, you hide behind fear,
A slow word has found you and others draw near,
The beloved has fallen, his quest unresolved,
Mother’s dreams, children’s screams,
All but screech to a halt,

What justice would claim the benevolent heart,
Who’s love for the world that’s so pure should depart,
Your Husband, or Wife, or your Partner,
Your Savior, a Saint, or a Martyr,
To die for the life of another,

So while we sit and pray for our dreams to come true,
Please don’t forget to give love to the ones that love you,
A Teacher, a Preacher, a Mentor and Friend,
Your Son, Daughter, Mother and Father,
Who will be there in the end,

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cliftondurant commented on Greed

08-31-2009

we are consume with greed that we for get to love every one need love great poem

Ydorj

08/31/2009

Thank You Clifton, Very nice to meet you.

CasimirJash commented on Greed

08-30-2009

so much competition, but what do you really win, first they love you then they hate you, in the end was it all worth it. Everyone can have a dream but will everyone's dream come true. nice poem, love the last stanza, don't forget to give love to the ones that loved you and help make your dreams come true.

Ydorj

08/31/2009

Thank you very much.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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