Hollow

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    Hollow

    Your words are hollow , they don't mean a thing...

    you seem to be following the same ol' routine.

    You tell me you love me and then walk away,

    leaving me standing there with nothing to say.

    I've told you to many times to count

    you'd rue the day that I walked out.

    You have only yourself to blame

    For leaving you I feel no shame.

    Your head is to thick and your heart is to shallow,

    What ever happend to make you such a coward?

    I need a man who can stand on his own

    this from you I've yet to be shown.

    I know in my heart that this feels right,

    Just let me go and please don't fight.

    If you take a minute and listen to what I have to say,

    you might come to realize you feel the same way.

    We've lasted so long I know it might seem wrong,

    but you've got to admit its time to move on.

    I need to be more then I am , its way past time

    that I took a stand.

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    LadyLuck commented on Hollow

    10-21-2010

    Stand Baby! It's a sorry thing that most men don t realize what they had until it's just that "had" not "have". Great write

    PRober commented on Hollow

    07-06-2009

    now I find this one... outstanding! Great rhymes and reasoning. Good job, keep writing!

    daniel081180 commented on Hollow

    07-01-2009

    This is a excellent poem and wrote very well. At times i believe we all go through this feeling. great way to put it into words. Also i had to read because your from my home state. I am originally from bloomington In. So anyways great job.... perfect 10

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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