I didn't know

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    I didn't know

    So long ago I was just a little girl,
    One with a dream so deep inside,
    Willing to give our life a whirl,
    I didnt know the things we'd find.

    We found a love so deep inside,
    One we can't let go,
    Even if it was our stubborn pride,
    You know I love you so.

    I didn't know the softness of your caress,
    Or the gentle way you'd look at me,
    I didnt know, my life, you would bless,
    You're the one who holds the key.

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    optimistic commented on I didn't know

    06-19-2009

    This is a great right, the poem seems to flow across the page well and you give great images and description. Good write
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    jademelissa74 commented on I didn't know

    06-19-2009

    A very sweet, emotional poem! I can feel the love wrapped in every phrase! Great Job Alexia! Continue to write!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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