i dont know

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i dont know

i dont know where to start
i dont know what to say
except for nobodys ever made me feel this way
i dont know how you have got m feeling this way
sitting all day lingering for your kiss
and in my mind i only have one wish
for me to be yours and you to be mine
i dont know why when im with you
my heart skips another beat
and then my stomach drops to my feet
why is that you cant see
that baby you belong with me
i really dont know what to do
if you have an idea please let me know
because i personally dont have a clue
all i know is that i want to be with you
i dont know if you feel the same
But i dont want to play no games
i want you in my life
only if its for real baby
please tell me i can be your lady
i dont know what to say
I dont know where to start
I just want to be the one whos in your heart

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RavenBridge commented on i dont know

11-10-2010

Wow I can really feel the longing and sense of want in this poem. Very well portrayed. Excellent representation of emotions.

cliftondurant commented on i dont know

11-10-2010

a beautiful love poem I hope your love are return to you as you wish

heartbreaker69

11/10/2010

thank you very much =)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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