When im with you

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    When im with you

    when im with you i feel blessed
    Feel like maybe God is putting me through a test
    To see if i have learned to love
    But you are my angel
    Sent from somewhere up above
    I don't know what it is that you do
    Whatever it is, makes me love you
    Whenever I hear your voice
    "My heart skips another beat
    Every time we speak
    I cant believe I feel so weak
    I've fallen so deep for you
    Crazy over you"

    When im with you im happy
    That you made me yours baby
    I can not begin to express to you
    what it is that i feel
    I pray and wish this to be real
    You are truly my dream come true
    I hope that you feel the same
    I find myself making doodles
    With my first and your last name
    You helped me love again
    I do now, didn't then
    Understand the meaning of bliss
    I think you had me by the first kiss

    When im with you my body trembles
    "Brings back the child i resemble"
    You've become my best friend
    This is not made pretend
    How did I get you to be mine?
    I've fallen so hard, so fast this time
    Baby you've become all I know
    And im not willing to let you go
    I don't have much else to say
    Other then now I will love you till my dying day

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    keithrberryjr commented on When im with you

    02-23-2009

    wow.great poem.

    Kyranna commented on When im with you

    02-21-2009

    this poem is good. :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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