I miss you
I miss you. I miss all the feelings I got from you, but I can still feel them. I can still feel your burning laced around my icy cold hands, your smell that radiates off your body. It pulls me closer to you and fills my nose with your sweet and irisitable scent. I can stil feel your arms wrapped around my body and squeezing to tight. The feeling that told me you would never let me go. I miss the way you spoke to me, with the kindness and sensitivity in your voice. The sound that I always wanted to hear. Every second of every day. I especially miss the way your lips touched mine. The way I couldn't controll myself of the butterflys in my stomache. Everytime you pulled closer to me and I could feel your breath on my neck. I cant stand how much I want to be with you again. It drives my crazy. I made a horrible mistake and now I'm paying the consequences. The hardest thing I had to do this morning was wake up without you. The thing is though is that I'm not supposed to cry and I'm not supposed to care its just that I cant stop caring because I'm in love with you.I miss you
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GonzoHunter commented on I miss you
11-24-2009
- You have quite the gift for writing tapped into at an early age. Keep it up
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11/27/2009
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Demosthenes commented on I miss you
05-26-2009
- That was really good! If you're really only 13, congradulations! If you start writing poetry like this, then there are infinite possibilities to your success. Keep it up!
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