The blade

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    The blade

     I feel the coolness as i touch my skin to the blade,
    It goes in easily as my thoughts slowly fade.
    I can feel the stinging pain getting stronger,
    I hold in all my tears until i cant take it any longer.
    Soon drips of my salty tears are filling my eyes,
    Now i cant help but to cry away my pride.
    I start to slowly pull it out,
    It hurts so much i want to shout.
    I look at the bloody one,
    Oh no what have i done?

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    redbloodink commented on The blade

    11-28-2009

    a lot of strong feelings in this work.... I hope you work out the pain because you have a lot too gain in life... With your talent that I see in just this one I have read..... I think that you captured they way many feel and have felt in and about life... Great job .......
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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