The truth

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    The truth

    To tell you the truth, it hurts. Its the feeling of buring acid through my blood. The scorching pain ripping open my heart, finding nothing then stabbing needles to sew it shut again. Then drilling a screw back into it forcing blood to gush out dripping onto my clothes and on mh body leaving stains behind. I can feel it trickeling down my chest. My fingertips are bloody as I lift them to my tongue. The salty taste is burning my mouth. I gasp in one last breathe. Yes the pain is finally over!

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    redbloodink commented on The truth

    11-28-2009

    I agree with Crush Sue..... Amazing talent and great poetic talent... Never give up on happiness or yourself... Talent like you have is a blessing and the hurt we sometimes have to feel is to help us bloom into beautiful and amazing people.... Please keep your mind open to all of life and everything and one in it.... You never know where it will lead you.... Thanx for sharing Red

    Crush commented on The truth

    07-29-2009

    MrsSue !!! this is amazingly dark but i do love it. amazingly descriptive. you obviously have talent and i hope you find happiness. i am not gonna lecture you here because the best/ hardest lessons are learned by the individual. please keep writing, that is some gift.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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