I thought you knew me.

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    I thought you knew me.

     I thought that you knew me,
    page by page,
    Chapter by chapter
    Turn up side down,
    I thought you knew all.

    I walked head high,
    Proud that somebody
    For once, had me in her heart.
    Abuses and embarrasement,
    All I was immume,
    Because I thought you knew me.

    I feel so disappointed,
    But I won't let it,
    Weigh me down again.
    Am greatful for all this.
    You help me feel proud of myself
    And that, I will remember you for.
    I walk away with a gratitude heart,
    Though hurt,
    But I know someday,
    All these will be at my back.
    I thought you knew me.

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on I thought you knew me.

    01-12-2011

    I think this poem has great metaphores, but to whom the poet speaks to is sad. How many times we might read a book, yet miss words or pages that are not quite understood. However, what is important is the reader keeps reading to try to understand.
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    crazyhome

    01/16/2011

    Writes always hide in the character they use in their writing. Even if it a fictional story, a writer will always represent him/herself. in this poem i am the persona.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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