I thought you knew me.

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    I thought you knew me.

     I thought that you knew me,
    page by page,
    Chapter by chapter
    Turn up side down,
    I thought you knew all.

    I walked head high,
    Proud that somebody
    For once, had me in her heart.
    Abuses and embarrasement,
    All I was immume,
    Because I thought you knew me.

    I feel so disappointed,
    But I won't let it,
    Weigh me down again.
    Am greatful for all this.
    You help me feel proud of myself
    And that, I will remember you for.
    I walk away with a gratitude heart,
    Though hurt,
    But I know someday,
    All these will be at my back.
    I thought you knew me.

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on I thought you knew me.

    01-12-2011

    I think this poem has great metaphores, but to whom the poet speaks to is sad. How many times we might read a book, yet miss words or pages that are not quite understood. However, what is important is the reader keeps reading to try to understand.
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    crazyhome

    01/16/2011

    Writes always hide in the character they use in their writing. Even if it a fictional story, a writer will always represent him/herself. in this poem i am the persona.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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