I'M BACK.

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    this is poem is written in pigeon english, no offence is meant.

    I'M BACK.

    Fall back please e never late
    E don tey wey I wan make we relate

    no be friend, u and me she come to seperate,
    I come be fish, her beauty na bait.

    na true we drink and eat from the same plate,
    but no be say we don dey date

    She confuse me I no come know my fate
    I never want make we create state.

    Now everything she dey do I don dey hate,
    I don come back abeg open your gate.

    De love you get and one she show me no be mate,
    I don test the two now I fit rate.

    Na u wey I suppose dey with I get d faith
    Eziokwu na only you we fit make my heart to vibrate.

    I love you die I fit write am for slate,
    I go do anything make you stay I no dey exaggerate.

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    poetheart87 commented on I'M BACK.

    11-23-2009

    THough I couldn't understand most of it, I think that this was excellently written. Keep on writing.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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