Name it.

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    Name it.

    I cant name it
    I can only explain what it feels
    it strange, it makes a wiseman foolish
    a strong man becomes weak at it's presence
    one so smart appears dull and lazy.

    its like death
    it doesnt ask why and manipluates the heart easily
    you cant explain it and
    you cant reason it, it takes over you,
    it knows no age.

    like smoke you can only see it
    but you cant have it,
    when you think you do
    even when you have it cant keep it for long 
    it slips away and leaves you sad.

    fools play it better
    cos you cant have a perfect understanding of it.
    it has lots of colors
    and it colors reality.

    give it a name.......

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    houseofbirdsong commented on Name it.

    06-29-2009

    Your heart has penetrated your writing in this piece. It is very descriptive and beautifully written. There seems to be a strength there that almost crumbles before me. You have great potential. Keep up the good work.

    jonnydgo commented on Name it.

    06-25-2009

    wel the name in context is rhetoric but the poem is powerfully grouped up together.

    ladydraeko commented on Name it.

    06-06-2009

    this poem really touched me. There is a lot of feeling and imagery here. I love give it a name - it reminds me of to the sea - one i wrote. I can't wait to see more of your work!! HUGS

    BDIsernhagen commented on Name it.

    06-04-2009

    I dont know if I can give it a name, but I can give this poem a 10. Your likening of love to death is very unique and interesting.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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