MARRY ME.

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    MARRY ME.

    She finaly looked into my case,
    my heart will nolonger worry and pace,
    she is here to put smiles on my face,
    Her pretty smiles makes my heartbeat to race. 
    The joy she brings me I cant trace,
    My love can you meet me at the alter in your white lace,
    if u say no i will craze.

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    jonnydgo commented on MARRY ME.

    06-25-2009

    It's good to go crazy for the one you love. I like the pattern of the rhymes in you poems.

    ladydraeko commented on MARRY ME.

    06-24-2009

    I see what you are trying to do here but i think you need to work on it a bit more, the foundation of the poem is good however i would change a few of the words to help it flow better. Overall I like it. HUGS!!!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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