Invisible

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An experiment of the acrostic style...and of self-awareness.

Invisible

I,

Nearly someone;

Variegated to blend,

Inside, where it’s safe;

Sanctuary, in my reclusive folds.

Intrigued, by my distant, anonymous voice;

Bastard to those who so remain untied;

Languishing desires, desperate to touch the willing soul;

Evolving into the most perfect plane of elusive transparency…

 

Invisible!

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bluskyinthenite commented on Invisible

04-06-2010

Oweeeeeee I see you! Very nice poem. Evolving into the most perfect plane of elusive transparency…Invisible. arent we all at one point in time. I feel that way plenty of times. Invisible imperceptible inviolable. I liked

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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Every Night 1
The Girl Who Stole The Blue 3
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