Just A Shell

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Composed during my final dream of early morning; but written shortly thereafter.

Just A Shell

I found a shell upon the shore,

With no one in it anymore;

No trace of former living creature;

Nor a glimpse of former features.

 

Smooth, yet hard, by touch--my fingers;

No warmth inside, then, ever lingers.

Age determined by external changes,

As youth succumbed to rearranges.

 

Perhaps kind words, evoked in passing,

Were trusted to such winds, not lasting;

And those whose tears so selfish keep;

Returned to safe, in life, their deep.

 

Such understand the terms left here;

Where memories replace the fear;

As shells embrace the timed decay;

And only love won’t wash away.

 

Nor torrid churning, daily tides;

Are weak to harm such soft insides;

Scars disfigure the external shell;

I would contend this, just as well.

 

Return you now, from my cupped hand;

To take your place among the sand;

Trust, that you are finally free;

As all of us--will come to be.

 

Then waves did reach with nurt’ring arms;

To draw this shell from any harm;

Returning to such times of mirth—

To home, to peace, await rebirth.

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jademelissa74 commented on Just A Shell

08-13-2009

This is a lovely, well-written poem. The imagery is brilliant and very touching. Amazing write and great read for me.!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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