It rains an aweful lot here

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    This is a poem I wrote almost a year ago.  I am working on changing it to a song. 

    It rains an aweful lot here

    A soldier went away to war and wrote home to his mom

    There’s so much to see here, seen so much since I’ve been gone

     

    It rains an awful lot here mom

    It comes down night and day

    And I’m afraid there’s not much going on

    Wish I had more to say

     

    It wasn’t what he had written it was what he didn’t write

    Somehow a mother always knows when her son isn’t right

    My boy, I am so proud of you since you became a man

    But I know that something must be wrong, tell me if you can

     

    Today I saw a pretty bird

    Its feathers were so bright

    But it turned out to be noisy

    And kept us up all night

    Yesterday a storm blew in

    I wish the skies would clear

    Nothing else for me to report

    It sure rains an awful lot here

     

    Son tell me what is going on you could always talk to me

    You are starting to scare your mother, how bad could it be

     

    He answered

    Yesterday I killed a man before he could kill me

    He is in my dreams, mom he’s all that I can see

    Billy went crazy and took his own life

    A man in Kentucky had stolen his wife

    David went home to work on his farm

    Driving a tractor with only one arm

    Wish there was something I could say to make it very clear

    I can’t wait to get home, Mom, it is a nightmare here

     

    It took a while before his mom wrote back

    Said his father had a heart attack

    Your father had a rough time but now he’s feeling better

    He really took it hard after reading your last letter

     

    The soldier wrote his mother

    Later on that night

    He knew he had a duty

    To make her feel alright

    There is nothing else to report

    Let me make it very clear

    It’s very uneventful

    It sure rains a whole lot here

    It sure rains a whole lot here

     

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