Lady In The Mist

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    Lady In The Mist

    Daylight be gone, never to be forlorn, I am the Lady In The Mist,

    To wander through castles and moors, a lovers call is borne, the veil is thin, this dance begin, for I stand between both worlds.

    Softness of the grey , scented mist which swirls, round as a lovers kiss, his beating heart must I miss? To travel night and day.

    No footprint left, nor trail I'll leave, flowing as ever with midnights breeze. Creeping ever closer to my lovers gate,
    his shadowed form, and curve of face....

    His blood rushing, as to a tower room,
    a scent that fills my burning face, tonight's gown made of grace. Of power and beauty could be no finer lace.

    Warm and inviting , will I slip in, to touch, yet to lie, within this human embrace.

    Seeking and searching , to find him there, waiting, watching my form to take. Songs of the night will I sing him here, feeling the power that had called me near.

    Lover my Lover your gleaming smile, eyes that burned with new found fire. Who would dare? place a kiss to have you dwell within the mist?

    Lady dear Lady, I wished your kiss, to stay with you forever in the mist, but another came and stole away, the gift that was for you.

    Hear me now Lady of the Void, I am forever mine and yours, no longer to be the dream I waste, twas nothing more then a simple taste, to bring me closer to the place,
    of dreams and magic that is your race.





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    TREVON commented on Lady In The Mist

    12-07-2011

    I like this poem, through your words I traveled with you.

    soulwriter commented on Lady In The Mist

    05-22-2009

    Misty and mystifying - alluring and wanton. Your words capture to embrace the reader. Great story form, write on!

    kdarcy commented on Lady In The Mist

    04-10-2009

    Good first read, I'll sit down with it again. Look forward to many more in the future, I'm new here and still deciding what to post ... thanks for sharing

    Madelynn commented on Lady In The Mist

    04-04-2009

    This was a captivating poem.It really grabs you from the first line to the last.The imagery was beautifully done,left me wanting to hear more of this love story!Thanks for putting me under your spell.

    origionalmerlin commented on Lady In The Mist

    04-04-2009

    hmmm word choice, framing and time sequence thoughts composed and clear... a good read.(it would be fun to see what you can do with sonnet form... plaesr read mine and comment too.. ty OM

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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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