Last Moment

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  • Death
    • Tadanori
    • has darkness in his eyes but there is slowly light beginning to shine in his heart

    Last Moment
    From the core of me
    My heartbeat withers and dies
    The world a wretched abyss

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    Blade commented on Last Moment

    05-09-2009

    interesting. short but shows a point
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    Gbenga commented on Last Moment

    05-08-2009

    few word but great meaning
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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