Untitled

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  • Tadanori
  • has darkness in his eyes but there is slowly light beginning to shine in his heart

Untitled

Choking the air from my lungs
The darkness is eating at my eyes
A million things could have been said
But no words would pass my parched lips

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Pisces00 commented on Untitled

07-17-2009

This is scary but I love it.. Tell me what were you feeling when you wrote this

Tadanori

07/18/2009

Actually, I was thinking about how I was feeling like I was getting smothered by my friends.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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