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    Learning
    Changing-strive to be different
    Find out true feelings before love is sent
    Embrace the light to save this drowning man
    To help my friends, I do what I can
    In blind perseverance I struggle to make the dream real
    But my love is stored away and I cannot break the seal
    If life is about how much you care
    I've died a million times, or was I ever there?
    Have I really made a difference in the life of anyone?
    Or am I a wasted life, has the race been run?
    A never ending battle in a war nobody can see
    Am I forever to be alone but never be free?

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    graceladymn commented on Learning

    02-11-2009

    There is always possibility and I mean that literally. Dark night of the soul is very real. Consider the lens you are using to look through, how long has it been since you wiped it off to get a fresh look?
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    clown commented on Learning

    01-02-2009

    pretty good. you need to have some poems on the uplifting side, though.
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