The Empty One No More

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The Empty One No More

_The trials in life are many_
_Be true to those you love; if any_

As a young boy I walked through fields of green and gold
Thinking how wonderful it was not to be old
As an adolescent I was jealous of the teens
Wanting to be like them, see what they've seen
As I reached puberty my thoughts were mixed
Joy and depression, will life ever be fixed?
As a teen my mind turned to girls
I would have them all, through them I whirl
In my twenties I partied all night
Until I fell in love and saw the light
In my thirties I was a broken man
Love has left, will I love again?
At thirty-six the dream comes true
My darling Jessi, one makes two
At thirty-eight my daughter is born
From my mind all doubts are torn
Now at forty-two life feels complete
Thank you God, for love so sweet


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SavVySam commented on The Empty One No More

09-13-2009

You made me smile, it is nice to see that things have worked out for you. God Bless

graceladymn commented on The Empty One No More

02-11-2009

Nice transitions through each growth level, easy to follow. Nice to see it turn in a favorable way for you.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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