Life

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  • Ness
  • is enjoying the nice Sunday evening...

Life

this is an easy ramble to write
it is a song that I COULD sing
it is a BATTLE that  I W O U L D w i n.

This is about everything that means anything,
and everything that means n o t h i n g.
This is about finding peace in each and every day,
about making life easier, gentler, kinder, for those around us.

This is for US.
THis is also for Me.
Little old me. . .

This is complicated, yet simple,
kind and sometimes even cruel...

but this is life...

LIVING
INTELLIGENTLY
FEELING DEEPLY
Enjoying MADLY

The life that is mine.
The goals that I reach,
the babies that I teach.
The songs that I sing, and those that are sung.

This is my life, it has only just begun.

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Sx9 commented on Life

12-03-2010

indeed so,we may thing other wise but what do we win when life never stops,and yet we fail to rise to that ambition of others,love this vibes for they are all different..

grownwoman commented on Life

07-01-2009

Ness, enjoyed "Life", it is inspiring, thought provoking, faithful and yours to live, no one can do that for you!

Ness

07/01/2009

Thanks so much, life has been so good to me, and I'm happy to be enjoying it.

TREVON commented on Life

06-18-2009

I like the rymth and the final destination of this poem Trevon

Ness

06/18/2009

Trevon, Thanks so much for the positive feedback!

jademelissa74 commented on Life

06-18-2009

What an inspirational piece. Beautifully written. The emotional phrases are well arranged, composing a tender masterpiece! Great Job Ness!

Ness

06/18/2009

Hello again, Thank you so much! I am such a fan of your work! Ness

Ness commented on Life

06-18-2009

This is a fun one about living life to its fullest!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

Ness’s Poems (5)

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Weeping Willow 3
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