--Linda--

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Linda, Im  sorry ! i was just a boy.

--Linda--

You bargained friendship
I agreed, knowing you was
about to enter courtship

You was quiet, shy
i knew i was the right guy

The other was still there
she had me by a hair !

But you had me by my heart
Oh... how i longed when we was apart

Two lovers, I did not love them the same
I guess I'm guilty of playing a game

You found out
I spoke out loud
Red faced, blood boils, purple head
Guilty as hell, it began to swell

all negotiations toward
The penetration

Linda, i did`nt know, that i abused !
I was so confused

The last time i remember you
Colorful dress, it was the carress

Your luscious lips, your hands on my hips
I moved below and tasted ever so slow

You moved, you cringed, 
We were truly hinged

I was your first, you should
 Have been my last

If by chance you have no romance
and still care, i have my prayer

Time has gone, dont sing that song

Linda I`m on my knees
Memories, memories, memories



 



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papapaczki commented on --Linda--

06-19-2009

Good use of words on the rymes. Feels like a letter to Linda, I think you captured the point of trying to send a message to her. Good work on this.

nmedina commented on --Linda--

06-18-2009

Oh my.......very nice, felt that nudge on my rib cage again. Very sad though, you didn't end up with Linda.

Richisfun

06/21/2009

Thanks, i did have her for 10 years tho, memories are great too, lol

LIFEWILL commented on --Linda--

06-18-2009

wow yeah i like it, you kind-of went to left field near the end, with the whole tasted her thing but it was good.

Richisfun

06/21/2009

Hehe ! left field, I try to center it nxt time, thanks

PunkCutie commented on --Linda--

06-17-2009

wow, you wrote it so well like i've been in the situation where my bf loved me but liked sum other chick and wow..i like this.very nice

BDIsernhagen commented on --Linda--

06-16-2009

wow..poingant, really. terrible wonderful. Yeats was right, we poets must pain and toil the most for our art.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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