UNFORGIVEN

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UNFORGIVEN

Quarter  is not 2 dimes and a nickel 

She`s more like 2 kids and a pickle

 

Darkened, hellish, and rebellish

Some think  she`s pickle relish

 

Oh I`m sure she taste good

But let`s not get in the eating mood

 

She smokes, she tokes

She drinks , she thinks

 

She is almost a stranger

Not born in a manger

 

Music, TV , and friends

Some seem set in their ways

But I think she could bend

What may come is not always fun

Will she be forgiven ?

 

Tomorrow is to far away

Where is my candy bar

 

I`m not your mister so don’t

Give my mind a blister

 

Different strokes for different  folks

Your ways are so different from mine

 

I hope you will be fine

I want the best for you

 

I love you too and dearly

I just hope you see it clearly

 

                      By: Rich Severson--2009


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Krystle commented on UNFORGIVEN

01-25-2011

Awesome great job!! liked this alot! look forward to reading more of your work:)

cadence commented on UNFORGIVEN

10-19-2010

nice poetry..all over the place...but very emotional.

Tempestlady commented on UNFORGIVEN

07-18-2009

Oretty good. Kinda sing song. Like the message, and the flow. Easy to follow, and not too long. Good write......

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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