Satisfaction

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Satisfaction

Have   you tried the New drink                                                                                                                   Called Nicole ?  It’s a Liqueur                           

Stop whispering 
Drunks are always hearing voices                                                                            

Oh come on,  it’s like a tickling feather in My ear 
Liqueur, Liqueur , Nicole, Nicole, If I Had a drink
it would be a good cure                                            

Another look, another drink                                             
Is this distraction, contraption or Satisfaction

Oh no !  I`m talking back to those voices                 
 How low can I go Nicole, I`m not drunk

Imagined conversation

You’re a tasty one, you are so warm                     
Been here long?  You’re my best freind

One shot is not enough, Give me a double             
Wait-  u-  oh- I`ll  take the whole bottle

I`m feeling good  whoa!

Sign says drink in moderation  
What a consideration

 It’s getting late who needs a mate                                   
I have my liqueur, her name is Nicole  
She need not climb a pole

She is warm, does not talk back                              
Sleeps with me in the sack

Liqueur has a hold I`ve been told                               
I`m starting to talk bold

Wilbling, wobbling, sobbing                                            
It always does this to me

Emotions come, emotions go                                      
Help me to let them go

I`ll have another to go                                             
Should it be a Nicole?

The voices screaming as she is leaning                       
Ye-yeh-no, I`ll drink it here

2 am, not sure if feeling good or fine                     
Nicole is still on my mind

Stumbling, sleeping, slept

Next morning oh, ah

Who and the hell is Nicole?

                                                By: rich Severson  6-20-09

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thecross commented on Satisfaction

01-11-2011

love the humor in this, every now and then when all else fails lose or find yourself in a bottle it can be quite therapeutic.

Tempestlady commented on Satisfaction

07-18-2009

A great piece about losin onesself in the minute. My guess is the bartender. or a lost love, or a kind of liquer. Enjoyed t. Write on......

phatdaddee commented on Satisfaction

07-13-2009

Great job! Was lost in the beginning but I found my way by the end!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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