Little Stars

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Hope you like it. Just sort of came up with it when me and my sister where making wishes one night. It is just saying wishing is never enough, the stars can't give you anything.

Little Stars

O how I wish those stars up there could shine just for me
To sho me where to go tonight
So that I could make just one wish
And see the world lit by their light.


But o little stars where did you go?
Come back for me now just this one night
Shine
Shine on
Through the dark that covers you
Be my giding light

I have one wish
And to be sure that it will come true
Will you keep it for me stars?
Keep it close at hand and at heart
So that it may come true

But you have a secret don't you stars?
Thats why your gone tonight
That secret that you keep so dear
Gaurded with your life

Now silly stars I laugh at you
silly stars I laugh
Dont try to hide
For I know your secret
That one gaurded with your life

The wishes that we make on you
They never realy come true
Is'nt that your secret stars?
Is'nt that the truth?

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spbsdude commented on Little Stars

11-24-2010

What a sweet poem and a sad message. Don't give up hope on those stars, they may someday come through for you when you least expect it.

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Little Stars

11-15-2010

Wishes come true when you least expect. Don't give up on those wishes. Work towards your goals and wishes and never stop wishing upon the stars. They fuel our sense of wonder and imagination. Be well........E

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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