Losing Hold of the Mind

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    Just an inside look into the fragmented thoughts which make me feel like I'm losing my mind.

    Losing Hold of the Mind

     Think thinking 
    Why are you thinking 
    Thoughts of no good
    Stop thinking stop stop  
    Third floor? Fourth floor?
    What floor? Thinking
    Stop thinking
    Crazy, why are you crazy?
    At the end, fourth floor
    What does wind sound like
    From the fourth floor?
    Stop crazy stop
    Stop stop stop stop
    Not again, stop repeating
    Jumpy twitchy crazy
    Stop it
    No thoughts no
    Imagination stop crazy
    Ha! Brain, crazy brain
    Ground, cozy ground?
    Probably not, hard ground
    Crazy crazy crazy 
    So many words
    Fragmented, why why? 

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    dahlusion commented on Losing Hold of the Mind

    09-14-2016

    "Imagination stop crazy Ha! Brain, crazy brain" –– love this! Bravo Poet ––))
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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