Forgive My Failures

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    Forgive My Failures

     I don't see how I'm helping you
    You seem so down and low
    I wish I knew what to say
    But I can't unless I know
    What you're feeling and why
    I know I hardly share how I feel
    I need to fix that side of me
    To help make myself seem more real
    No one should be as quiet as we are
    Most people express what's on their mind
    I suppose I should be glad
    At least we express on paper that's lined

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    slimgoodwoody commented on Forgive My Failures

    11-06-2013

    Communication is soooo important in any relationship. Great poem, keep up the good work!!
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    RettaJ commented on Forgive My Failures

    11-05-2013

    Wow this truly was an excellent read...this sounds just like my favorite guy. He so does not know how to express himself very well.
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    Artie commented on Forgive My Failures

    10-29-2013

    Some people need to be shown the strength in sharing their inner feelings before they can find it within themselves. It's possible you both have the same problem. Someone has to go first ;)
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    dahlusion commented on Forgive My Failures

    10-24-2013

    Sweet and honest with a pinch of love. Bravo! .............................. !
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    Solaris commented on Forgive My Failures

    09-13-2011

    interesting and well written good exspression of emotion
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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