The Abyss
I've come to a placeFull of nothingness
A dark and eerie palace
Lost in the night, the land of the abyss
The Abyss
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Full of nothingness
A dark and eerie palace
Lost in the night, the land of the abyss
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Tempestlady commented on The Abyss
08-07-2009
- Sounds like persephone in hell. Love the simplicity and clarity of the message. You are special, and yu can do anything you put your mind to, anything! Follow your hopes and dreams. You'll go far. Write on....
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