LOVE

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LOVE

"LOVE "

Picture perfect images of us living life exclusively, Thoughts of you frequent my mind, yet you rarely think of me


Ask me how I feel about you I'm precise with what I say, Ask you the same question your response is short and vague


Love is simple and joyful, yet you make it complex, Your inconsistencies, and I don't knows, is causing to much stress


In the beginning you were willing to explore love's possibilities,  then you changed the words to our song, and we're singing on different keys


Now I'm left scorned and the aftertaste is bittersweet, I still crave your presence, but I have to what's best for me


I'm tired of going along with this relationship as you see fit, What about my needs and how I feel, hell I'm worth it


What could have been love is over, I'm done and calling it quits,  You say I sound like an "Angry Black Woman", oh well, so be it….

WRITTEN BY SAMARIA DESHON

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TheLostPoet215 commented on LOVE

01-17-2011

I can dig it..boop..i have a poem called Love also..check it out sumtime

wizthom commented on LOVE

09-28-2009

beautiful realization for a cowards attempt at placin the blame on you,,.he was a boy that tried on a pair off shoes too big 4 his feet.wizthom

phatdaddee commented on LOVE

09-07-2009

Excellent poem! Experience is the best teacher and it sounds like you've learned from this "experience". Wish you the best in your future"Love" endeavors! :-)

Samaria14

09/07/2009

Definitely a learning experience.. Thank you for reading.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Samaria14’s Poems (7)

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LOVE 4
HER EYES 3
A ROSE FOR YOU 4
IF 3
ABANDONED MOMENTS 1
DESPAIR 2
WITHIN ME 2