Midnight Picnic

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    Midnight Picnic

     I dream of a time with you in my arms
    Your beautiful look sent my heart a charm
    A picnic with you late one night
    Moments together under stars so brite.

    A time to injoy with you by my side
    Moments to enjoy our hearts inside
    To share with you sealed with a kiss
    We take each other to a moment of bliss.

    I dream of this picnic and stars above
    To be with you the lady i love
    The sweetness of wine from each our lips
    A midnight picnic we spend in a kiss.

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    WordSlinger commented on Midnight Picnic

    06-23-2009

    I love the title, and the flow, and smoothness of the poem is cool. It actually opens up images of the picnic, a good love poem.
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    truckingd

    09/28/2009

    sorry for thanking you driving this old truck cross country keeps me very busy again thankyou for the comment

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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