My Eyes

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    My Eyes
    my eyes are a blue-green,
    like the ocean waves.
    a golden hue dances around my pupil,
    like the golden rays of the sun.
    my eyes are like the ocean,
    tying my soul to it forever.

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    SuziJean commented on My Eyes

    05-15-2013

    wow, amazing description! your eyes, are they hazel? lol doesn't matter they are beautiful! your poem makes me want to write my own descriptive poems :) Good poem :)
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    BringMeBullets commented on My Eyes

    03-02-2010

    This is really good. I am surprised to see such a good write from someone your age. Great job!
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    Poetgal

    03/14/2010

    thanks ^-^

    Stormclouds commented on My Eyes

    05-12-2009

    I realy liked this. Your description is outstanding!!!
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    Kingwebstar

    06/06/2012

    Love this poem it is short but awesome stay happy writing Love Da KinG

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