never

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    never
    never...
    never again to fell the sun on her face,
    the fresh spring grass on her bare feet,
    never again to smell the salty ocean air,
    all becouse she raised the gun's cold
    metal point to her lips and pulled the trigger.
    never

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    valelisha commented on never

    03-27-2009

    Gave me chills, needs spell check, but just copy and paste into Microsoft Word, and edit grammar. Great imagery
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    Bladebearer commented on never

    03-18-2009

    Wow. Very dark and sad.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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