pitter patter

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    poem i wrote when i saw rain on my school bus window. :3

    pitter patter

    The rain falls, hiding the tears of
    a girl close to the edge.
    pitter patter
    pitter patter

    the rain falls, forcing the picnicking
    couple to flee for shelter.
    pitter patter
    pitter patter

    the rain falls, reminding the child
    she left her doll on the swings
    pitter patter
    pitter patter
                  
    the rain falls, and the girl
    thinks of others, how they have it hard,
    and lets the rain heal her soul.
    pitter patter
    pitter patter

    the rain falls, and the couple's hearts
    grow even closer, giggling slightly at the fact
    they had been best friends for ages.
    pitter patter
    pitter patter

    the rain falls, and the child runs outside,
    to find a pure white kitten under
    her favorite tree,hiding from the rain.
    pitter patter
    pitter patter

    the rain falls, healing some,
    and bringing others together.
    pitter patter
    pitter patter

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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