My Life is On the Line (cont'd)

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    My Life is On the Line (cont'd)

    My life is on the line
    I gotta write, I have to write
    Cuz these lines are my life
    Somehow I feel almost sublime
    Though, still going thru trying times
    Shiii, these words are a paradigm
    To why I gotta write, I have to write
    Cuz these lines are my life
    Or shall I say my lifeline
    See, my life is in line w/these rhymes
    They are the vine with which I'm intertwined
    And combined they create a magical wine
    Suspending me, moving me, back and forth in time
    They are the rocks on which I climb
    Struggling up and reaching the sky
    Yet still under ward by The Utmost High
    So my life is in line and on the line
    I gotta write, I have to write
    Cuz these lines are my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    streetprophit11 commented on My Life is On the Line (cont'd)

    04-22-2009

    A-1!! I mean what can I say...you truly got skills. Nice one love the flow, keep up the great work.

    GoldnDiosa

    10/09/2009

    great thank you so much im glad u keep up with my work and enjoy it i really like that how u been

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    GoldnDiosa’s Poems (8)

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    EPOPEE 3
    Some Enchanted Evening 1
    I Enjoy Living 2
    To Each It's Own 3
    Steadily As I Dream 2
    My Life is On the Line (cont'd) 1
    Awakening 3