My Life Part II

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My Life Part II

Do you want to know how I feel every single day,

Feels like my life is just fadin' away,

Like I have nothing to loose,

Nothing to do,

And nowhere to go,

I'm turnin’ cold so I've been told,

I'm turning into something I don't want to be,

Not the hulk but a hideous beast,

And when I'm sleep I'm twisting in the sheets,

Because all the spirits coming inside of me,

But then I start coughing up,

Spirits because I had enough,

They started calling me names saying I aint tough,

Oh well because I want a new life,

I wanted to die then reincarnate into something nice,

Now days later,

I feel like a new creature,

I feel the prayers from my family, friends and teachers,

I guess what they say about God is true,

He won't put too much on you.

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candicane88 commented on My Life Part II

06-26-2009

that is very true... and this poem is very deep.... lol. dang... i mean realy i will still pray for you and everything... but if you can feel all that happening what will one more prayer do... it may change you a bit er it might just make you.... into you..

cottonluv commented on My Life Part II

05-31-2009

this is some deep shit once again sound like something i would write but all this means is you turning into a man a real man keep up the good work

LadyIntellect commented on My Life Part II

05-22-2009

This is so deep it makes me want to b a nicer person lol nd think of things that r goin rite nstead of things that r not...loved it

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

cbp3216dawg’s Poems (12)

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Feelings 0
Tough Road 4
Forever 5
My Life Part IV 3
My Life Part III 3
My Life Part II 3
My Life Part I 4
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