My Life Part IV

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My Life Part IV

Are you the Anti-Christ?

Are you the one that is supposed to take our lives?

There’s no one else so we mite as well follow you,

Other wise we'll look around don't know what to do,

There aren’t any damn clues,

Except walk around and make up crews,

Walk around wit knifes,

Walk around wit guns,

Everyday activities rises,

Every gun goes off we run,

No where to hide,

Every race divides,

We back to segregation,

Blacks’ vs. Whites,

Blacks’ vs. “The Nation”,

Somebody got shot damn I couldn't save em',

Cause I'm the one laying on the ground shakin',

I shot my self cause I couldn’t take it,

I just again died but this time a bullet piercing through my skin,

My life had too much sin,

I use to always win,

But I just lost so I'm not undefeated,

What goes around comes back around,

Sad fully this is how my life ended.

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candicane88 commented on My Life Part IV

06-26-2009

DAM... that one... wow.... i really dont even know what to say... that really does resemble... how everything these days are with people... its so crazy... but its real talk. i loved this one... i think i can say itss my favorite becuase its so deep and everything... nice job =]

cottonluv commented on My Life Part IV

05-31-2009

lil bro this is the number one for me i love this and i wish every young black man could read this and i am not just saying this b/c u my bro good work bravo bravo

LadyIntellect commented on My Life Part IV

05-22-2009

I dont even know what to say!You've made it so hard for me to pick my fave that I'm even typing in english lol

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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