My Life Part I

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My Life Part I

In my mind I'm goin very psycotic,

My eyes are turing black like I'm going demonic,

I'm not the same i changed since i was little,

I use to be a good child but all tht crumbled,

Now I'm joking on people for no apparent reason,

They take it to the heart the next day they bleedin',

But I dont show no feelins,

Because I'm trying to keep my thug image,

But in reality deep inside I'm tearin',

I'm tearin' inside because I don't like how I'm livin',

I don't think I deserve to be in this present world,

All I'm being is negative,

I need a reality check,

Look at me now i got triple six on my neck,

I might as well be satans next aprentice,

Because everynight thats all I'll be dreamin',

I'm down in hell with his army scheme'n,

On whos going to be the next victim,

I’m writing this to show you how I’m feelin’.

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candicane88 commented on My Life Part I

06-26-2009

hey... you know... i have a friend that is exactly like that. when you go to say them things... if you would like to change everything... why dont you just take a second to think about everything and actually take that step back to reality... idk if you are a thug meaning you are in a gang and everything... but trust me you can be a thug and be a really nice guy as well... there are times and places where you would have to show no emotions... but in the real life just be you... dont worry about non of that shit... and just be you... im not sure if you really wanted to hear that... and everything... but yea. lol.

cottonluv commented on My Life Part I

05-31-2009

lil bro this is good and deep the way i like it this sounds like something i would write keep up the good work bravo bravo

LadyIntellect commented on My Life Part I

05-22-2009

I swear I am rite in the same boat with u no kiddin this is realli realli good makes me a lil jealous lol

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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