The Pain Inside II

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    The Pain Inside II

    To me the pain means this to me,
    Very dark cold insane and mysterious,
    The pain that i go through is to tough for a human,
    Now im startin to question God if I'm a human,
    Or am i like jesus to come help these people,
    Lying cheatin and stealin asking me what can I do to help em,
    But wht can i do if I'm selfish?
    How can I help people if I can't help myself,
    The pain is beginnin' to get a hold of me,
    Feels like its creating a creature in me,
    Feels like my heart is turning cold,
    Nowadays everything i do..i do so bold,
    The thing inside me said it'll give me good treatin',
    An angel from heaven told me its a demon,
    The devil told me when I die I'm goin to be apart of his legion,
    And told me forever I'm never going to age again.

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    jrblood59 commented on The Pain Inside II

    08-29-2010

    i like it kuz i feel wher u komin from but stay out dat mind frame bro u gone be fine u r the best of us love ya bro

    silentwhisper commented on The Pain Inside II

    02-10-2009

    Words are deep and your thoughts give others time to sit and think. Good write. And I agree with realistic on their comments.....The devil is a liar, dont go that path.

    concience commented on The Pain Inside II

    02-08-2009

    like i said homie- god hears you- and he's holding u rightnow- i aint no preacer- but i been there too. i feel u a hunded %- stay up.

    bforibus commented on The Pain Inside II

    02-08-2009

    you sound like me.

    cottonluv commented on The Pain Inside II

    02-07-2009

    good job

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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