My Secret Love

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My Secret Love

I have a secret love
but no one knows
Except me
i will never tell
for he is mine and no one elses
you can't have him
but does he like me
i need to know
Could he like me?
Maybe but i need to know
i need him to like me
because, i like him back
i know he does
I must find out
i have to know before its to late
But mabey he doesn't like me
but, i think he does
so i walk toward his locker my mind racing
i must find out before he slips through my fingers
i dont want him to leave
But what if he doesn't like me back?

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jerseycrtz commented on My Secret Love

06-12-2010

haha I remember that day. I was the one who started the poem!

Teardrops commented on My Secret Love

04-22-2010

you have to ask and then you will know great poem thanks for the read Marie

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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