wanting you

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    wanting you

     I stay up late to wait for you
    But you never come
    you never show
    You never seem to care
    you never seem to think of me
    But then i know
    you are with her
    you say u like me maybe love me
    but then you go off and cheat
    you call and kiss her and love her
    but you can't do that with me
    so i'll sit her
    in my room
    staying up late
    waiting for u to show your face
    but i'm smarter now
    I know what to do
    so leave me alone
    I don't want ot see you
    or talk to you
    so goodbye
    take he not me
    leave me now waiting

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    jerseycrtz commented on wanting you

    06-12-2010

    Awesome! I love it! It shows how your waiting for someone to come and love you, even if the person you wrote about itsnt real. Good job!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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