neanderthal

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    neanderthal

    an empty cavern

    remains from a world of dreams

    pictographs line the walls

    testament to the primitive beginnings

    of an unfathomable love

    my stable rock

    crushed to dirt

    i lay helpless upon the dust of your ambivalence.



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    lightcourier commented on neanderthal

    03-24-2009

    You put a lot of thought into your work. Makes it nice to read because of it's depth.

    Savvy commented on neanderthal

    03-23-2009

    great form and beautiful word choice!

    mspoetris commented on neanderthal

    03-23-2009

    Really liked how this blended and I can hear the echo of many.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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