ptolemaic musings

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    ptolemaic musings
    your love is the asp
    clenched so tightly to my breast
    venom burns within.

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    RPT40 commented on ptolemaic musings

    01-23-2010

    Interesting point of view. We expose ourselves to the deepest wounds in the quest for love, and that is what makes it so worth while. Live for risk
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    lightcourier commented on ptolemaic musings

    03-24-2009

    Nice imagery.
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    aggieprof commented on ptolemaic musings

    03-15-2009

    Gives a strong visual.
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