torrents of thought

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    torrents of thought
    Abortive emotions
    Cast away like stones
    Dreams of skipping lightly
    Over a feigned glassy reality
    Abandoned
    True lucidity has transformed
    These pebbles…
    Now a ponderous payload
    That will only sink
    To the darkest depths of mad infatuation
    In that swirling madness
    Frothy unfettered freedom
    Logics liberation.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on torrents of thought

    01-28-2011

    Couldn't agree with RPT anymore... very nice piece.. Wow.. there is still some good in Ca.
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    RPT40 commented on torrents of thought

    02-06-2010

    This is soooooooo good!! This whole piece, right down to the title, is so insightful. This is going to my favorites list.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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